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Mout Ka Jazeera (Death Island)
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| Description | Death Island (Mout Ka Jazeera) by Aatir Shaheen is an adventure story for young pre-teen and teen age readers who like to read action adventure suspense thriller stories. Its a story of a young pakistani boy and 4 other american african travellers who got stuck in Death Island, after their sea ship was invaded by Pirates. All 5 surviving sea ship travellers reached an island and faced many hardships of jungle beasts, cannibal tribesmen, criminal gangs and some other horrible dangers. Death Island is a story giving moral lessons of courage, wisdom, quick thinking and high hopes of survival and defeating the hardships of life |
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| Tags | deathisland, childrenadventurestories | ||||
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| Submission Date | 07:28:2009 |
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i think we appriciated the writter 4 written this story ilike it and i hope u writtenmore stories that give us a big lesson
Posted 06:23:2011 - 09:35:30:
Page no7 Pay sab say badi scientific mistake hai. Kyon k khara pani peenay say insan aur zyada pyas mehsus karta hai. Aur yeh pyas bhujanay k liyay jism apnay tamam fluids istimal karta hai. Aur jiski vajah say aadmi ki mout vaqa ho sakti hai. Baqi theek thak he hai.
Posted 05:01:2011 - 06:48:02:
KAHANI ACHI HE LKN ITNI B ACHI NHN HE ZARA B SUSPENS NHN HE ITNE BARRE WRITER KO ITNE LOW STANDARD KI STORY NHN LIKHNI CHAHYE TI INHON NE TO APNE BAJAY PASKAL KO STORY KA HERO BNA DIYA LKN JO B HO STORY ACHI TI GOOD LUCK ATIR BHAI
Posted 10:19:2010 - 13:11:58:
it is very good noval
mughy aesy fiction novels pasand heen
attir sb se request he mazeed aesy fiction novels likheen
thanks
Posted 09:25:2010 - 10:26:21:
Poorly written by an inexperienced writer.
Many things are like that that they are not acceptable, like many chances were available to use arms but hero didn't, and many events repeated again and again.........!
Sorry to say, but POORLY Written.
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Joined: Dec 23, 2009
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bachon se shayed murad...bilkul he bachay nahi balkeh pre-teens hogi...jese keh hero ki age suggest karti hay. doosri baat yeh keh bachon ke lie message tou hay. jese arms ka use na karna. himmat se kaam lena or mushkil halaat me bhi himmat na haarna etc.
yah kahani bachoon kliay nahi hai ,,kion k is main koi nasihat nahi hai bas khofnaki hi hai,, or dusri baat yeh hai k hameed koi arms kion nahi istmal karta jab k us k paasss bohat ziada moqey b mojud they,,i like kiyaabghar mere liay yah kisi nemat se kam nahi hai ,,
Posted 02:22:2010 - 23:39:25:
yah kahani bachoon kliay nahi hai ,,kion k is main koi nasihat nahi hai bas khofnaki hi hai,, or dusri baat yeh hai k hameed koi arms kion nahi istmal karta jab k us k paasss bohat ziada moqey b mojud they,,i like kiyaabghar mere liay yah kisi nemat se kam nahi hai ,,
main samj nahi paya k hero arm ko kion nahi use karta:: wese main b yeh hi kahoon ga k yeh bachoon ki kahani to nahi thi ,, kion k is main koi,,, sabaq,,,achai,,,nasihat,,,, nahi hai ,,anyways i like kitaabghar,, muje apney mulak se door jahan par urdu ki koi kitaab nahi mil saklti yahan par kitaabgher ek nemat se kam nahi hai ,,
Posted 12:28:2009 - 12:52:24:
i did like the story, I would not let my son read this book but i enjoyed reading this .......
But overall story is good
Rashid